Tuesday, October 15, 2024

Outsiders the Rewrite


A heart of gold

If you die my heart will break 

The autumn air with birds landing on rough bark and the police sirens blaring 

In the park all the boys could taste the blood

Sodapop working at DX Station oblivious to Ponyboy and Johnny’s danger

But was he

Back at the movies Dally, Ponyboy and Johnny snuck in

Dally tried to rizz up Cherry but failed tragically

Bob submerged Ponyboy in the fountain but ended up dying himself

“Stay gold, Ponyboy. Stay gold”

The wild fire of death is coming for Johnny

The brown strand turned bright blonde on Ponyboy’s head

Johnny and Ponyboy fly threw the fiery church to save the children

Dally storms in to the hospital and talks to Moody Martha to see how Johnny is doing

The greasers are going to win the Rumble against the Soces

Greasers and Soces went to the friendly rumble

Johnny isn’t dead, he can’t be

Ponyboy rennen (Run, Ponyboy in Dutch)

Gone with the Wind speaks to Johnny and Ponyboy to be safe

Cop cars lights blinding, gun shots going off, Dally rolling down the hill, his last word, “Ponyboy”


-Marae


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